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KariM18
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If Anyone Wants to Take the Time to Read..*
Posted: 04-02-04 12:13pm
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I just read the poem crystal wrote (very
good btw) and it made me think , y not
share my poems with u? I only have 4 on
the internet, ive wrote tons and tons but
these are the 4 I had published last
year...
You can either go to www.Poetry.Com and
type in under where it says 'last name,
and first name' (which is oxley, kari) and
then the 4 poems will pop up and u just
click on em.. Or u can just click here
to get directly to em* by the way, onces a
little confusing called ''endings
beginning' and if u dont get it (some
havent) its about a lady being abused by
her husband and she commits suicide.
Most these poems dont really refer to me,
I just write them*
http://www.Poetry.
Com/publications/search.Asp
hopefully u'll read em and let me know
what u think*
Last edited by KariM18 on 04-02-04 12:19pm; edited 1 time in total
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dominicksmommie
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dominicksmommie
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dominicksmommie
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Posted: 04-02-04 12:16pm
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U said last year.. It says this were
published in 2004?
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KariM18
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dominicksmommie
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HomecomingQueen2003
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Posted: 04-02-04 12:50pm
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Those are very good! I actually started
getting teary-eyed when I read "ending's
beginning".
Megan
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BabyP
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Posted: 04-02-04 14:20pm
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I loved them!!!!! They r wonderful!!!!
Xoxoxoxo I love the one lil miss
perfect.....Keep on writin girlyyy.
Xoxoxoxoxoxoxo pamala & baby jaylynn
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KariM18
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Posted: 04-03-04 01:58am
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Thank you so much girls! It means alot!
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PregnaJordan
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Posted: 04-03-04 04:52am
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Those are really good, I couldnt think to
do stuff like that..I get too damn
frustrated
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Mesmerizeu15
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Posted: 04-03-04 04:55am
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It takes a lot talent, good job
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smith8500
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Hey
Posted: 04-03-04 04:56am
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Wow, those are good~even I must admit it.
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KariM18
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Posted: 04-03-04 07:40am
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Thanks girls~! And chanda, thank you
alot, im sure it takes alot to make a nice
comment to someone u dont like but it
shows ur maturity~ thanks everyone*
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