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mommabear16

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Joined: 16 Jan 2004
Posts: 1222
Location: illinois
Kind Of...a Deep Poem I Wrote Last Night.
Posted: 08-10-04 16:57pm

The deed is done.
He made his will.
He wrote his note.
Now were's the pills

lifes just too hard.
Not worth living.
No more thoughts, worth giving.

He takes the drugs.
His heart is beating fast.
Then it slows down.
He's dead just like that.

He felt no love.
He felt no shame.
All he felt, was doing it pain.


Now he's gone.
He died alone.
All because no love was shone.

The deed is done.
He made his will.
He had wrote the note.
Empty bottle of pills.
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Scarf

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Joined: 12 Feb 2004
Posts: 1062
Location: Ontario, Canada

Posted: 08-10-04 16:58pm

Wow..Thats really good. And sad Sad
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MegEve

Experienced User , Rather EHEALTHy
Joined: 13 Nov 2003
Posts: 353
Location: Alabama

Posted: 08-10-04 18:08pm

Nikki, you have a talent that does not need to go unnoticed. You're awesome!

Love,
megan
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smith8500

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Joined: 17 Sep 2003
Posts: 6623
Location: Louisiana
Hey
Posted: 08-10-04 18:27pm

Nikki, huni. It kills me that you don't do something about this. You have so much talent! I wish I could do 1/2 as good as that! Oh my! I love it!
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sparklypixie12

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Joined: 17 Sep 2003
Posts: 3099

Posted: 08-10-04 19:26pm

Wow-you're seriously good
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