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bellax0x
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Writers?
Posted: 08-27-04 22:32pm
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Is anyone in here a very good writer, has
a career that has to do with writing?
I have to write an essay as part of my
summer reading project for english 2
honors. I have to write about how each of
the actions that the boys take in the book
lord of the flies is nothing more then an
attempt to survive in difficult
conditions.
Would someone please read over it and see
what they think? Even if you arnt too
good of a writer, id like some advice.
<3
gaby
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June4life
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Posted: 08-27-04 22:34pm
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Gaby, have you gone to sparknotes.Com??
They give really good character analysis
and stuff like that!!
Www.Sparknotes.Com
you might have to sign up for an account,
but its free!
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bellax0x
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Posted: 08-27-04 22:35pm
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Thanks! I dont need help writing it tho,
I have it done. I just want ppl to read
it and see if they have any tips of how I
can make it better. Thank you tho!
<3
gaby
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June4life
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Posted: 08-27-04 22:40pm
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Ohh!! I love editing!! I will read it,
if you want me to!! Lol
sorry, I misunderstood!
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Scarf
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Posted: 08-27-04 22:40pm
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I've read lord of the flies last year for
english. I can go over it if you want
shannon xoxox
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bellax0x
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Posted: 08-27-04 22:42pm
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Thanks guys! Can I have your email
addresses?
<3
gaby
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June4life
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Posted: 08-27-04 22:43pm
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Do you think you could pm it to me? I'm
having trouble getting into my email
because of this new firewall software
thing my dad bought!
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Scarf
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Posted: 08-27-04 22:45pm
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| june4life
wrote: | | do you think you could pm it
to me? I'm having trouble getting into
my email because of this new firewall
software thing my dad
bought! |
same here..But for other reasons. I think
I have a virus. I cant get in to hotmail
or yahoo mail. Its gayy 
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bellax0x
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Posted: 08-27-04 22:46pm
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Thats fine. Ill pm it to you
<3
gaby
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bellax0x
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Posted: 08-27-04 22:47pm
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Thats fine. Ill pm it to you
<3
gaby
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Scarf
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bellax0x
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Posted: 08-27-04 22:54pm
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September 8th (first day of school) and I
have to do a timeline thing on a poster
board, the whole project is worth 200
pts.. (essay is 150)
<3
gaby
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bd1012
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Posted: 08-27-04 22:55pm
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I am pretty good at editing if you need
more opinions.. Im raelly god at
spelning... 
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Scarf
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Posted: 08-27-04 22:55pm
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I have to log off now (gotta get up early
tomorrow) but i'll send you a pm tomorrow
with corrections and comments. So far its
good!
Shannon xoxox
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bellax0x
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Posted: 08-27-04 22:55pm
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Thanks! Ill send it over! Lol
<3
gaby
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