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smith8500
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Gaby~
Posted: 08-29-04 20:02pm
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Hey girl,
i'm working on checking your paper. Do
you write poetry also because you write
wonderfully!
Love,
chanda 
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bellax0x
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Posted: 08-29-04 20:31pm
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Thanks! Yep I lovvee writing poetry! Ill
write somthin tonight and show it to ya'll
later as a sample if you want.
<3
gaby
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bellax0x
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Posted: 08-29-04 20:34pm
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I need inspiration, does anyone have an
idea of what I could write about?
<3
gaby
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tweety12986
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bellax0x
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Posted: 08-29-04 20:49pm
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Hah, sorry I dont think so.
<3
gaby
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babyrae
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Posted: 08-29-04 21:14pm
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Babies! Life in particular 
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bellax0x
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Posted: 08-29-04 21:30pm
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I was going to write about babies =) maybe
ill try again
<3
gaby
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bellax0x
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Posted: 08-29-04 22:00pm
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I feel kinda dumb posting this. Because
I dont think it came out good. But here
ya go!
She holds her belly as she cries
how can she handle it all?
All they do is criticize
and make her fell so small
and then all of the sudden
all her worries disappear
as her baby kicks her side
thats when she sheds her last tear
this baby was a gift from god
heaven sent to you
you can do it if you try
i promise, you'll make it through
she holds her belly as she cries
this time its happy tears
now she knows shell make it through
through all her coming years
.. Idk lol
<3
gaby
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lauren22
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bellax0x
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Posted: 08-29-04 23:07pm
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you think? Why
thanks! I didnt think it was that great
but thank you!
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dahlia pier
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Posted: 08-30-04 02:10am
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Wow awesome! Thats really good.
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smith8500
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Hey
Posted: 08-30-04 07:02am
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I really did like it gaby! Good job!
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bellax0x
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KissyBai912
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Posted: 08-30-04 14:07pm
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*goosebumps* that gave me shivers gaby!
You are very talented. I used to write
poetry all the time. But it was all sad,
angry and depressed stuff. I havent for a
long time. I miss it but i've got no
time! Lol! But yes it was very good I
thought. Sweet.
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tweety12986
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Posted: 08-30-04 14:10pm
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Wow... That was great for just off the
top of your head even if it wasnt off the
top of your head that is a wonderful poem
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bellax0x
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