Joined: 12 Mar 2004 Posts: 2236 Location: ***Wisconsin Baby***
I Am Writing a Paper..lookn For Ideas.. Posted: 09-15-04 14:12pm
Hello everyone,
I am writing a descriptive essay and
having a horrible time with it. Its about
how I am most like my childhood self. I
am calling it something like my fiary tale
or the fairy tale that ends. I am started
it out just like a fairy tale once upon a
time in a candy land world. Then moving
on how I see things through my childhood
eyes ...But as I grow up the candy land
turns darker and colder every time I get a
little older. Then shows how things are
as I get older..And the candy land turns
out to be a the real world..With violence
and such. Anyways my point..Haha.
I need ideas on how to describe this candy
land....That I see as a child. Like
flowers made out of lolipops ect..If you
can think of anything please help me out
thanks!
I don't have many ideas to add, but huni!
You started that paper out great! I love
your idea! The candy land idea is
awesome!
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IDABABY
Extremely EHEALTHy
Joined: 12 Mar 2004 Posts: 2236 Location: ***Wisconsin Baby***
Posted: 09-15-04 17:08pm
:d aww thank you chanda!
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sparklypixie12
Extremely EHEALTHy
Joined: 17 Sep 2003 Posts: 3099
Posted: 09-15-04 17:18pm
Have you seen 'willy wonka & the
chocolate factory'?? I would describe
this candy land in the way willy wonka
does when the children go into the
factory. There are sweet umbrellas, giant
gummy bears, flowers filled with cream
& a chocolate lake. Good luck!
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bellax0x
Extremely EHEALTHy
Joined: 10 Jun 2004 Posts: 3572 Location: Jersey Baby!
Posted: 09-15-04 20:20pm
Heres some ideas, idk if im too, uhm
violent lol..
"rivers of chocolate slowely turn to
blood. What used to be smiles filled with
happiness are now frowns and looks of
scorn filled with deciet and anger."
"my secure childhood world contained no
handicaps, racism, or prejudice. With
every step I take, and every day that
pases, that thought fades more and more."
idk id think of more but im lazy lol
<3
gaby
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IDABABY
Extremely EHEALTHy
Joined: 12 Mar 2004 Posts: 2236 Location: ***Wisconsin Baby***
Posted: 09-15-04 21:23pm
That was beautiful gaby, come out with
some more damn it haha...You are too damn
good
