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bellax0x
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Wwii Research Paper
Posted: 11-07-04 11:23am
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I need a thesis statement! Heres my
outline for my introduction
i. Genocide is defined as the deliberate
and systematic destruction of a racial,
political, or cultural group.
A. 6 million jews were killed as a
result of adolf hitler’s final solution.
1. They were killed by means of gas
chambers, guns, and starving to death or
becoming deathly sick.
B. Hitler’s thoughts of the the final
solution came about in (approx.) 1941.
2. The plan was in full swing by
1942
thesis statement:
any idea?
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gaby
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laura_girl
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Posted: 11-07-04 11:56am
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Well, it's a toughie. What is your
paper on in particuliar? What do you want
to focus on? It's hard to pick a thesis
when you already seem to have the
arguments. If you have a thesis then I
can make a thesis statement....
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bellax0x
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Posted: 11-07-04 12:39pm
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The paper is about the final solution (to
have the perfect aryian race and no jews).
It cant be oppinionated bc its a research
paper so it must be just facts. Did that
help at all?
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gaby
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laura_girl
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Posted: 11-07-04 13:01pm
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What about writing on how the "final
solution" didn't work? About how jews
kept their culture alive during the
holocaust and later went on to form the
state of israel, which will result in the
continued preservation of the jewish
people. (actaully it had already been
created to a degree, but it's creation
went against much of the doctrine of
orthodox judaism so immigration was more
limited as opposed to after the war when
there was in influx)
your thesis statement could be something
like this:
"despite the genocide commited by the nazi
army in auswitz, bergen-belsen and other
camps, hitler's "final solution" was
ultimately a failure as it resulted in the
fortification of the state of israel and
therefore garuntee that jewish and the
jewish people will survive."
is that too off topic?
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Sarahs_In_Trouble
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Hi Gaby
Posted: 11-07-04 13:24pm
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I'm not sure but I think that hitler hated
the jews way before then...Like maybe in
the 1930s because things were bad in
germany for a lot of people because of
world war one...And the jews did better
and had stores and stuff and that made the
germans like hitler hate them. Don't know
if that helps.
Sarah
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little_woman
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Posted: 11-07-04 13:28pm
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You could go into hitlers past a bit more,
why he hated jewish people so much, and
how he began to rise to power:
1. He blamed the jewish for germany's
recession from ww1
2. He was an excellent orator and was
angry from all his failings, he thought he
was a genious when he really was just
average
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bellax0x
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Posted: 11-07-04 13:39pm
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I cant do it too much on hitler. It has
to be soley on the final solution. What
it was, and what and who was involved in
it. I know he started hating the jews
before that but the idea to eliminate all
of them didnt come about until 1940
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gaby
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little_woman
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Posted: 11-07-04 13:42pm
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There were a ton of side stories such as
medical research *terrible things, he kept
children in a special facility called the
zoo and did research on them* twin studies
were the most barbaric thing ever, he got
scientists and doctors involved, kidnapped
them and made them work for him, that sort
of stuff?
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Posted: 11-07-04 13:53pm
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| laura_girl
wrote: |
"despite the genocide commited by the nazi
army in auswitz, bergen-belsen and other
camps, hitler's "final solution" was
ultimately a failure as it resulted in the
fortification of the state of israel and
therefore garuntee that jewish and the
jewish people will survive."
is that too off
topic? |
very good, but maybe judiasm
and the jewish people will survive,
instead of jewish and the jewish people
will survive. : )
edited: and maybe you should talk about
how he published his plans in the mein
kamf years before, (i think it is spelled
that way) and noone stopped him, and
perhaps you can tie in how the idea of
genocide and 'a perfect, one
nationality/race' has lived on since the
death of hitler, and talk about these
instances. Http://www.Genoci
dewatch.Org/genocidetable.Htm
Last edited by Heathergirl on 11-07-04 13:59pm; edited 1 time in total
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laura_girl
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Posted: 11-07-04 13:58pm
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| heathergirl
wrote: | | laura_girl
wrote: |
"despite the genocide commited by the nazi
army in auswitz, bergen-belsen and other
camps, hitler's "final solution" was
ultimately a failure as it resulted in the
fortification of the state of israel and
therefore garuntee that jewish and the
jewish people will survive."
is that too off
topic? |
very good, but maybe judiasm
and the jewish people will sruvive,
instead of jewish and the jewish people
will survive. :
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oy! I ment to write "jewish culture and
the jewish people" 
dang. In my defense, I am writing my own
thesis (20 pages - 40% not going so well)
and am completely braindead because of it
:d
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Posted: 11-07-04 14:00pm
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Haha, don't sweat it, typos suck. Lol
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bellax0x
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Posted: 11-07-04 14:06pm
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I think ive got it:the idea of a perfect
aryan race started off in hitler’s head,
but through persuasive speeches and
actions, as well as intimidation, he got
many people to follow in his footsteps and
believe the same as he did.
<3
gaby
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laura_girl
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Posted: 11-07-04 14:18pm
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If that's what you're going to do, find a
copy of "mein kamf", it's basically
hitler's manifesto. It was written when
he was in jail in 1922 and is the
formulation of his theories on aryanism
etc. Basically he was so burned by
germany's defeat in ww1 that he sees the
jewish people as the scapegoat and blames
them. It may be hard to find though
because many bookstores / libraries have
banned it because of it's anti-semetic
content. But definitely worth reading.
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bellax0x
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bellax0x
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Posted: 11-07-04 17:36pm
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Now that I think about it that wouldnt be
a good one, that would be a good one for a
paper about hitlers genius..
Maybe I will do that tho
<3
gaby
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Posted: 11-07-04 18:00pm
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I dont even know what a thesis is.
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Posted: 11-07-04 18:04pm
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Haha - its the statement in the beginning
of your paper that tells the "main idea"
of the paper. It basically sums up your
whole paper in one sentence.
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