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Poem.....
Posted: 12-17-04 12:16pm
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This is my disclaimer for steen: beware
these poems are not facts just someones
thoughts and feelings!!!!
I tried finding the poem that went around
my highschool in the 90's and this was
pretty close.
Abortion
my hair is black, my eyes are brown
mommy, you'd love having me around
it's early yet, the month is one
though you can;t see me yet, i've just
begun
one month later, the month is two
i'm still but a part of you
time is passing the month is three
i'm getting to be someone as you can see
still so small that I don't have to hide
i'm just a little seed inside
you'll love me mommy, just wait and see
i'm going to make you proud of me....
....I've got a new home now, the month is
seven
mommy didn't want me, so now i'm in
heaven
it's so beautiful, but now i'm gone
i have no memory to carry on
if I were still there now the month would
be eight
i was murdered by my mommy's own hand
i guess this is too young to understand
good-bye mommy, the month would be nine
i could've been living just fine
although i'm in heaven, I still have to
cry
because of mommy, I had to die.
---unknown
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Posted: 12-17-04 12:19pm
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This is the one I was originally looking
for and found it:
(abortion) diary of an unborn child
mommy keeps me safe
mommy keeps me worm
she handles me with love
mommy helps me form
i'm two months old today
and the gift that you gave me
was a pair of bright blue eyes
so that some day I can see
i've already have my arms
and a little puppy nose
and at the end of my two feet
are little things called toes
i'm looking foword to my life
to laugh and learn to walk
teddy bears and toys
then I learn to talk
i wonder so quitly
where we are going today
in a car or a bus
off so far away
why are we laying down mommy?
Being pulled away on four wheels
this dosent usually happen
how funny it feels
going through the doors
people dressed in green
if they hurt you mommy
just let out a little scream
mommy what is happening
i'm starting to cry
come quickley mommy
their forcing me to die
their killing me mommy
their pulling me apart
first my legs then my arms
no, now their at my heart
good - bye mommy good - bye
but now i'll never see
the sky the grass or the trees
and never feel the breeze
i love you mommy I really do
i only wish you could of loved me too.
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Moira
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Re: Poem.....
Posted: 12-17-04 12:22pm
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| lil_blaze2004
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....I've got a new home now, the month is
seven |
a seven month abortion? And how often do
you think these happen?
The poem was ridiculous. Month old
embryos can't think or anything close to
it.
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Re: Poem.....
Posted: 12-17-04 12:24pm
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| moira
wrote: | | lil_blaze2004
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....I've got a new home now, the month is
seven |
a seven month abortion? And how often do
you think these happen?
The poem was ridiculous. Month old
embryos can't think or anything close to
it. |
maybe if you could read properly you would
see that it stops at 3 months and then
skips to when the baby would be in it's
7th month-- person...
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Moira
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Posted: 12-17-04 12:26pm
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| lil_blaze2004
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i'm looking foword to my
life |
fetus' can't think till the third
trimester, so there's no way this fetus
can look forward to anything.
| lil
wrote: | | how funny it feels
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fetus' can't feel anything at this point.
| lil
wrote: | | i'm starting to
cry |
fetus' at this stage can't cry either.
| lil
wrote: | | their pulling me
apart |
actually, in most abortions the fetus is
so small it remains intact. No pulling
apart there.
Emotional and unscientific hyperbole.
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Re: Poem.....
Posted: 12-17-04 12:33pm
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| lil_blaze2004
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maybe if you could read properly you would
see that it stops at 3 months and then
skips to when the baby would be in it's
7th month-- |
the text can be read as a 7month abortion,
as it doesn't conclusively say
otherwise.
<
/div>
wow, I thought that was just a british
word! So pleased our culture has spread
over to you.
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Posted: 12-17-04 12:35pm
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| moira
wrote: | | lil_blaze2004
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i'm looking foword to my
life |
fetus' can't think till the third
trimester, so there's no way this fetus
can look forward to anything.
| lil
wrote: | | how funny it feels
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fetus' can't feel anything at this point.
| lil
wrote: | | i'm starting to
cry |
fetus' at this stage can't cry either.
| lil
wrote: | | their pulling me
apart |
actually, in most abortions the fetus is
so small it remains intact. No pulling
apart there.
Emotional and unscientific
hyperbole. |
person: I had 2 miscarriages before this
pregnancy and 1 was at 6 weeks and there
was pulling apart as it was coming out
piece by piece.
And you know what ??? I didn't write
this I just posted it. So my dear you are
just a nagging beastly person----i love
that it doesn't block that term....
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Posted: 12-17-04 12:36pm
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Lilblaze.. Why don't you go back to the
pregnancy forum where you belong.. If
abortion upsets you so much than why are
you in here? Btw.. You don't mess with
moira or you mess with me and vice versa!!
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Re: Poem.....
Posted: 12-17-04 12:36pm
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| moira
wrote: | | lil_blaze2004
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maybe if you could read properly you would
see that it stops at 3 months and then
skips to when the baby would be in it's
7th month-- |
the text can be read as a 7month abortion,
as it doesn't conclusively say
otherwise.
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wow, I thought that was just a british
word! So pleased our culture has spread
over to you. |
considering my dad was born and raised in
scotland you are a bloody person! And
i'm not american.
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Posted: 12-17-04 12:38pm
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That makes no sense lilblaze.. Moira is a
person because of the place your dad was
from.. 
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Posted: 12-17-04 12:38pm
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| lil_blaze2004
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person: I had 2 miscarriages before this
pregnancy and 1 was at 6 weeks and there
was pulling apart as it was coming out
piece by piece.
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i'm sorry to hear about your miscarriages
and glad to hear you're doing well now.
What was coming out was womb lining, just
as in a heavy period. The embryo at that
stage is too small for you to see "piece
by piece".
| lil
wrote: | | and you know what ??? I
didn't write this I just posted
it. |
check your facts before you post such
rubbish again.
| lil
wrote: | | so my dear you are just a
nagging beastly person----i love that it
doesn't block that
term.... |
wow. You are such a skilful debator!
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Posted: 12-17-04 12:42pm
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| bd1012
wrote: | | that makes no sense
lilblaze.. Moira is a person because of
the place your dad was from.. |
listen little girl--i never had a prob
with u before now but... Learn to read
sweetie pie. Moira said: " I thought that
was just a british word! So pleased our
culture has spread over to you."
so I told her that my dad is from over
ther so maybe that's why I know the terms,
plus I read things.....
Moira we don't know each other so u coming
and attacking a poem I posted in the
abortion .D.E.B.A.T.E. Forum is just
being beastly. Whatever I don't have
time for childish .caca.!
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Posted: 12-17-04 12:43pm
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She didnt' attack it, she debated it and
explained the inaccuracies of it.. Isnt'
that what debate is all about?
Seriously.. Let's be civil.. This isn't
a loaded question.. What was she supposed
to do with that poem? Agree with it?
She merely explained why it was wrong
because it does indeed have inaccuracies
about the facts and she explained that.
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Posted: 12-17-04 12:48pm
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Whatever poems are someones thoughts--so
we are attacking the way someone
thinks.... By the way iu have friends
who've had aboritons because they thought
they were not ready for children (and
these are 26+yr olds) and I still love
them. Abortion might not be for me or
for everyone. But it's a person's choice.
I posted these poems in the debate
forum, I did not go into the abortion
forum and post them cause that's where
people will go to share differen
texperiences and i'm not trying to make
anyonefeel bad about what they've done,
just putting someone's feeling in the
forum.
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Re: Moira....
Posted: 12-17-04 12:49pm
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| jlee77
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you have no proof of the things you said
above, therefore are you a "liar" like i'm
so frequently accused
of? |
fetal pain has repeatedly been proved to
you. Here's a very readable analysis on
fetal thought http://www.
Brain-mind.Com/fetalbraindevelopment.Html<
/a>
| jlee
wrote: | oh...And there is "pulling
apart" with every abortion. "the
vacuum-like device" sucks pieces out
little by little, regardless of how small.
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it sucks it all out in one go and it's so
small it generally remains intact.
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Re: Moira....
Posted: 12-17-04 12:50pm
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| moira
wrote: | | jlee77
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you have no proof of the things you said
above, therefore are you a "liar" like i'm
so frequently accused
of? |
fetal pain has repeatedly been proved to
you. Here's a very readable analysis on
fetal thought http://www.
Brain-mind.Com/fetalbraindevelopment.Html<
/a>
| jlee
wrote: | oh...And there is "pulling
apart" with every abortion. "the
vacuum-like device" sucks pieces out
little by little, regardless of how small.
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it sucks it all out in one go and it's so
small it generally remains
intact. |
generally .N.O.T. Always
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Re: Poem.....
Posted: 12-17-04 12:54pm
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and i'm not
american. |
did I say you were?
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Posted: 12-17-04 12:56pm
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| lil_blaze2004
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moira we don't know each other so u coming
and attacking a poem I posted in the
abortion .D.E.B.A.T.E.
Forum |
yes. A debate forum. Where things are
d.E.B.A.T.E.D. I wasn't about to let
people be misled by misinformation about
fetal awareness, pain etc.
| lil
wrote: | | is just being beastly.
Whatever I don't have time for childish
.caca.! |
and you calling me a t**t is a loving and
mature act.
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Posted: 12-17-04 13:03pm
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| moira
wrote: | | lil_blaze2004
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moira we don't know each other so u coming
and attacking a poem I posted in the
abortion .D.E.B.A.T.E.
Forum |
yes. A debate forum. Where things
are d.E.B.A.T.E.D. I wasn't about to
let people be misled by misinformation
about fetal awareness, pain etc.
| lil
wrote: | | is just being beastly.
Whatever I don't have time for childish
.caca.! |
and you calling me a t**t is a loving and
mature act. |
ok i'm sorry about the person thing--i did
not think they would post it and then when
they did I got caught up in the cursing
moment. As for the american thing, you
said" so pleased our culture has spread
over to you" and I just wanted you to
know in montreal, we are way more european
than in the states. So I was just
letting u know I was not from the
states.
As for misleading info.. These are
.P.O.E.M.S. Someone's feelings not
facts. I never said they were facts
darling.
Again sorry for the bloody person thing..
I'm having a bad day and this stupid
forum has made it worse.. I'm going back
to my preggo forum where the women are
nice. Ciao!
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Posted: 12-17-04 13:07pm
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| lil_blaze2004
wrote: | | whatever poems are someones
thoughts--so we are attacking the way
someone thinks.... I posted these
poems in the debate forum, I did not go
into the abortion forum and post them
cause that's where people will go to share
differen texperiences and i'm not trying
to make anyonefeel bad about what they've
done, just putting someone's feeling in
the forum. |
yes, you posted them in the debate forum,
not the abortion poetry reading forum. As
such, they become the subject of debate.
Try a literary society if you want respect
for the emotional contact or creativity
and imagination.
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