Suddenly everything about you is so
great,
theres a smile on your face,
a bounce in your step,
and on top of the world.
Suddenly darkness falls
engulfing every inch on your soul,
the smile from your face is gone
you eyes fill will anger and sadness
the world is now bleak.
Suddenly your off on your feet again
going from place to place
ideas, thoughts race through your mind
you words coming out a hundred miles an
hour.
Then, then there is a pause,
no here, not there,
only wondering where will you go next
or who will you be?
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wildirishrose352
New User, Becoming EHEALTHy
Joined: 16 Jun 2005 Posts: 5 Location: Texas
Bipolar Disorder Posted: 06-17-05 23:07pm
Very well written poetry. I love to read
poetry as well as write it. This is very
good. Poetry is a good outlet for your
anger, use it when you feel that 'bad'
side of you coming out. Get a piece of
paper and a pen and just write down
everything you are thinking so you can
look back and see what triggers these
outbreaks. If you can find the starting
point maybe you can do something about
your bipolar disorder. Best of luck, if
you ever want to send some poetry my way
you can always email me at wildirishrose352@sbcglobal.Net. If
you ever need someone to vent to i'll be
here for you.
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Jemini
Experienced User , Rather EHEALTHy
Joined: 25 May 2005 Posts: 58 Location: Australia
Posted: 06-22-05 06:28am
Thank your for replying I was wanting to
see what people would think as this has
been actually the first time i've been
able to get something more out there as I
tend to have alot of my writing and poetry
to myself.
