Kia
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Joined: 23 Jun 2004 Posts: 6594 Location: Planet Tampaxia,
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Need Some Proof Readers
Posted: 02-06-07 17:43pm
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Ok first off if you are easily offended
don't bother - you won't like some
stuff.
For those of you that are grown up enough
for adult humor or are not easily offended
would you please do a bit of proof reading
on my "fun pages"???
my fun pages
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anttm04
Experienced User , Rather EHEALTHy
Joined: 05 Feb 2006 Posts: 121
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Posted: 02-06-07 17:55pm
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What kind of proof reading are you looking
for? And if anything is found that needs
correcting, how would that be done?
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Kia
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Joined: 23 Jun 2004 Posts: 6594 Location: Planet Tampaxia,
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Posted: 02-06-07 18:09pm
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Just let me know
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Sandbox Party
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Joined: 25 Jul 2006 Posts: 7276
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Posted: 02-06-07 18:21pm
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Lol that a .L.O.T of proof reading.
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tigresacanela24
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Joined: 11 Nov 2005 Posts: 5261 Location: Treat your children well, eventually they'll choose your nursing home.
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Posted: 02-06-07 19:12pm
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Not proofing, just reading.
Oh and for 80's child the guy in the pink
mask on fat albert was dumb donald I
think...
Man I miss the 80s!!!
Ooohhhhhh *singing*
it's been 7 hours and 15 days
since you took your love away
i go out every night and sleep all day
since you took your love away
since you been gone I can do whatever I
want
i can see whomever I choose
i can eat my dinner in a fancy restaurant
but nothing
i said nothing can take away these blues
cause nothing compares
nothing compares to you
it's been so lonely without you here
like a bird without a song
nothing can stop these lonely tears from
falling
tell me baby where did I go wrong
i could put my arms around every boy I
see
but they'd only remind me of you
i went to the doctor n'guess what he told
me
guess what he told me
he said girl you better try to have fun
no matter what you'll do
but he's a fool
cause nothing compares
nothing compares to you....
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Mommy35
Extremely EHEALTHy
Joined: 23 Sep 2006 Posts: 3165 Location: Vacationland, USA,
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Posted: 02-06-07 19:16pm
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The jokes are great!!! The doll and
blinky makers are really cool, is it ok if
I give the link to my daughter?
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lil_blaze2004
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Posted: 02-06-07 19:33pm
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I do proofreading at work , i'll check 'em
out.
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lil_blaze2004
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Posted: 02-06-07 19:37pm
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Won't have time to do it all tonight.
page 1.
This is a collection of amusing things I
have collected over the years.
I have decided I have way too much fun
stuff hidden in the depths of my computer,
so I have now uploaded them all to my
website for everyone to enjoy.
Beware though; much of the humor found
within may contain bad language or adult
humor.
If you are easily offended - this isn't
the place for you
kia
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Sunflower_pie81
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Joined: 17 Jan 2006 Posts: 5041 Location: to hell with this crap
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Posted: 02-06-07 21:24pm
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All the flowers that you planted, mama
in the back yard
all died when you went away
i know that living with you baby was
sometimes hard
but i'm willing to give it another try
'cause nothing compares...
No nothing compares
nothing compares to you...
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tinkinpink84
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Posted: 02-07-07 06:20am
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I think this forum will be quite empty as
everyones reading your webpage, I like how
its really simple. The jokes are great.
Proofreading for mistakes? Or what?
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tinkinpink84
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Posted: 02-07-07 06:27am
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On yer blinkies what does it mean to
hotlink?
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Kia
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Joined: 23 Jun 2004 Posts: 6594 Location: Planet Tampaxia,
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Posted: 02-07-07 07:43am
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Just want to know if I have any serious
spelling mistakes really, missed words,
double words.
I'm not going for perfection, just needs
to be "reasonable".
Hotlinking means linking directly to a
blinkie/doll on my site instead of
uploading it to imagecave or something.
Forums of which I am a member - ie here -
are welcome to hotlink (right click -
properties - copy address[url] of blinkie
and then just insert the img code.
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