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Kia

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Need Some Proof Readers
Posted: 02-06-07 17:43pm

Ok first off if you are easily offended don't bother - you won't like some stuff.

For those of you that are grown up enough for adult humor or are not easily offended would you please do a bit of proof reading on my "fun pages"???

my fun pages
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anttm04

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Joined: 05 Feb 2006
Posts: 121

Posted: 02-06-07 17:55pm

What kind of proof reading are you looking for? And if anything is found that needs correcting, how would that be done?
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Kia

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Posted: 02-06-07 18:09pm

Just let me know Wink
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Sandbox Party

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Joined: 25 Jul 2006
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Posted: 02-06-07 18:21pm

Lol that a .L.O.T of proof reading.
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tigresacanela24

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Joined: 11 Nov 2005
Posts: 5261
Location: Treat your children well, eventually they'll choose your nursing home.

Posted: 02-06-07 19:12pm

Not proofing, just reading.


Oh and for 80's child the guy in the pink mask on fat albert was dumb donald I think...


Man I miss the 80s!!!

Ooohhhhhh *singing*

it's been 7 hours and 15 days
since you took your love away
i go out every night and sleep all day
since you took your love away
since you been gone I can do whatever I want
i can see whomever I choose
i can eat my dinner in a fancy restaurant
but nothing
i said nothing can take away these blues
cause nothing compares
nothing compares to you

it's been so lonely without you here
like a bird without a song
nothing can stop these lonely tears from falling
tell me baby where did I go wrong
i could put my arms around every boy I see
but they'd only remind me of you
i went to the doctor n'guess what he told me
guess what he told me
he said girl you better try to have fun
no matter what you'll do
but he's a fool
cause nothing compares
nothing compares to you....
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Mommy35

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Joined: 23 Sep 2006
Posts: 3165
Location: Vacationland, USA,

Posted: 02-06-07 19:16pm

The jokes are great!!! The doll and blinky makers are really cool, is it ok if I give the link to my daughter?
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lil_blaze2004

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Posted: 02-06-07 19:33pm

I do proofreading at work , i'll check 'em out. Smile
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lil_blaze2004

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Posted: 02-06-07 19:37pm

Won't have time to do it all tonight. Confused Laughing

page 1.



This is a collection of amusing things I have collected over the years.



I have decided I have way too much fun stuff hidden in the depths of my computer, so I have now uploaded them all to my website for everyone to enjoy.


Beware though; much of the humor found within may contain bad language or adult humor.

If you are easily offended - this isn't the place for you

kia
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Sunflower_pie81

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Joined: 17 Jan 2006
Posts: 5041
Location: to hell with this crap

Posted: 02-06-07 21:24pm

All the flowers that you planted, mama
in the back yard
all died when you went away
i know that living with you baby was sometimes hard
but i'm willing to give it another try
'cause nothing compares...
No nothing compares
nothing compares to you...
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tinkinpink84

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Posted: 02-07-07 06:20am

I think this forum will be quite empty as everyones reading your webpage, I like how its really simple. The jokes are great. Proofreading for mistakes? Or what?
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tinkinpink84

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Posted: 02-07-07 06:27am

On yer blinkies what does it mean to hotlink?
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Kia

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Posts: 6594
Location: Planet Tampaxia,

Posted: 02-07-07 07:43am

Just want to know if I have any serious spelling mistakes really, missed words, double words.

I'm not going for perfection, just needs to be "reasonable".

Hotlinking means linking directly to a blinkie/doll on my site instead of uploading it to imagecave or something.

Forums of which I am a member - ie here - are welcome to hotlink (right click - properties - copy address[url] of blinkie and then just insert the img code.
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