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Poetry
Posted: 02-16-07 23:55pm
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Today when I was doing my creative writing
work this was the assignment..
Fill in the bllanks
i see
i see
i think
i hear
i hear
i think
i touch
i touch
i believe
this is what I wrote
i see your face
i see you cry
i think "what could be wrong?"
i hear you cry
i hear you whisper
i think of reasons why
i touch your shoulder
i touch your cheek
i believe I love you
now can u fill in the blanks?
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Re: Poetry
Posted: 02-17-07 05:55am
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Re: Poetry
Posted: 02-17-07 06:36am
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I see your eyes they keep me strong
i see myself falling though the love has
gone
i think it is time for my flame to die
i hear your voice and it makes me cry.
I hear my heart breaking all over again
i think will this torture ever end and
when?
I touch your cheek and you disppear
i touch your ghost though you are never
here
i believe I am lost forever in a love
that's no more,
destined to an eternity of hurt to the
core
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Posted: 02-17-07 06:55am
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And another (for angel)
i see you in the golden sun
i see you in the rain
i think of you wherever I am
i hear my heart break all over again
i hear the sound of angels singing
i think you're with them too
i touch your soft hair in my dreams
i touch my heart, it beats for you
i believe you were too good for this
world,
and .God needed help from you
and one day we will all meet again
so I can say how much I love you
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Posted: 02-17-07 09:29am
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| beckster06
wrote: | and another (for angel)
i see you in the golden sun
i see you in the rain
i think of you wherever I am
i hear my heart break all over again
i hear the sound of angels singing
i think you're with them too
i touch your soft hair in my dreams
i touch my heart, it beats for you
i believe you were too good for this
world,
and .God needed help from you
and one day we will all meet again
so I can say how much I love
you |
.Wow, I got chills!
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Posted: 02-17-07 13:29pm
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Aw thanks hun 
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Posted: 02-17-07 13:44pm
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Aww beckster your poems are really good,
the one for angel makes me sad, it was
good!
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Posted: 02-17-07 23:58pm
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I see the way you look at me when you
think i'm not watching
i see how you turn from me when I am
i think, "how could this have happened to
us?"
i hear the truth in your voice
i hear my soul cry
i think that I still love you
i touch you and you tense away
i touch you but you don't want me to
i believe we've come to the beginning of
our end
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Posted: 02-18-07 00:00am
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Aw k 
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Posted: 02-18-07 00:03am
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It's all good, terra. 
the end of one thing is always the
beginning of something else.
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Posted: 02-18-07 00:32am
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I see love and hate, in the same room.
I see groups of people, each one keeping
to itself.
I think that this isn't the way things
should be.
I hear gossip being spread and rumors
being created.
I hear the striking silence of no one
doing anything to stop it.
I think that I may have lost faith in
humanity.
I touch her shoulder, to see if she's
okay.
I touch her soul, and despite what she
says, I know that she isn't.
I believe that things change and people
change, but not for the better, because
the only thing we'll ever care about is
self preservation.
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Posted: 02-18-07 00:58am
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True kay be strong, we're
here for you!
And tdr that was good too! All of these
are sad lol I need to make a happy one! I
suck at poetry tho lol
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Posted: 02-18-07 01:13am
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I think this is somewhat happier,
.Terra.
I see everyone file into the room, finding
their friends and taking a seat.
I see our director take the mic, and
shuffle through papers to begin his
speech.
I think that this is it, we're in the home
stretch.
I hear our director starting his speech,
losing his place, and cracking a joke.
I hear the familiar laughter of my fellow
band members, and the familiar giggling
silence that follows.
I think that this has the potential to be
incredibly boring, or incredibly
interesting, or maybe somewhere in
between.
I touch the fake wooden arm rest, and pick
at the seat number that's once again
falling off.
I touch my friend's leg, since she keeps
kicking me, albeit she doesn't mean to.
I believe that we're going to .Spain, and
we'll have the time of our lives.
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Posted: 02-18-07 02:25am
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Lol that sounds like something that must
have really happened :p but that is
happier haha I wanna go to spain
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Posted: 02-18-07 03:42am
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| hcobrunette06
wrote: | | lol that sounds like
something that must have really happened
:p but that is happier haha I wanna go to
spain |
oh, how that happened...One particularly
memorable portion of that speech (which
lasted 2 1/2 freakin' hours!) was when my
grade level principal described how, on
the pre-trip, she basically beat off an
old lady who tried to snatch her purse.
Yes, my .G.L.P beats up old ladies.
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